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The common house was empty and quiet, with the exception for distant footsteps from a hallway whose direction could not be determined because of its echo. This building was larger than many common houses. Three stories in total it held no less than ten families. The one he intended to visit was on the third floor. He climbed the steps remarking to himself how pitted they had become from decades of use. The bathhouse was on ground level afterall. He took a few short steps before knocking on the second door down the balcony overlooking the geometric pattern in the center of the main hall below.

»«describethewalktoLin’shouse article2-visitschildhoodfemalefriend

There was no response. He was used to this, and patiently waited about enough time to begin to feel uncomfortable with standing outside the door. Erin knocked once again, much loader this time. A door opened down the hall quickly to check of their door had been knocked. He awkwardly waved to the irritated elderly man, and let off an exasperated sigh. He once more sharply tapped his knuckles backhanded against the old wood. This time the door flew open quickly with Erin's hand still raised to knock again. In front was a moderately tall young woman, whom Erin still had to look down to meet eyes with.

»«shesayshello

“Oh right, is it the 6th beat already. I didn't realize it come so soon.” she spoke combing her sholder length brown hair through her fingers. “Lin, who is it. Is that Erin? Tell him to come in. I made some tea when I woke up, I'm sure he would like some.” Lin's mother rambled through her kitchen. “Yes, mam. Thank you.” Erin boasted across the house, not sure exactly where hes friend's mother had gone.

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chapter 2 - at the castle
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chapter 3 - in the military
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chapter 4 - he wants something
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chapter 5 - the stuggle
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chapter 6 - the montage
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chapter 7 - enters an unfamiliar situation
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  article 5 - see this mission will be a piece of cake
  
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chapter 8 - the journey is hard
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  article 4 - just then everything gets better
  
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act 2

chapter 9 - meeting with the goddess
  article 1 - explore the town and port
  
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  article 2 - this world is vastly different but still feels normal
  
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  article 4 - he finds a girl
  
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chapter 10 - something is amiss
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chapter 11 - reveal of the poor
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  article 5 - the main searches for information to find the insurgent
  
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chapter 12 - adapts to it
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  article 4 - it is dangerous to go alone take this, the girl will keep you safe
  
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  article 5 - heads off to find the stone
  
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chapter 13 - relationship improves with the girl
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chapter 14 - the trials
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chapter 15 - he enters the unknown
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chapter 16 - get what they wanted
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chapter 17 - the stone
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chapter 18 - the island begins to fall
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chapter 19 - the land is saved
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  article 2 - he is confronted by nation
  
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chapter 20 - he tries to seek help for keygemin
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  article 5 - says we will find a way to bring her back
  
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chapter 21 - the airship ride home
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  article 2 - joined by loyalists who trust him an his cause
  
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  article 4 - a long shot and he can save up
  
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  article 5 - airship arrives to dock at old world
  
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chapter 22 - confronts his superiors
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  article 3 - punches commander in face
  
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notes/temp2.txt · Last modified: 2018/08/22 21:45 by soaringmoon